Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as whole.
Discuss this view and give your opinion.
Several human beings are carnivore, they utilize non-vegetarian food as a essential part of their diet whereas some assert that being herbivorous are helpful for their own health such as reducing the risk of heart disease, diabetes and some cancer and also useful to maintain eco system. I will shed light on this views in forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are plethora of merits being vegans which are advantageous for their body and also for the globe. First and foremost, plant-based diet improve blood vessel function and reduce the risk of metabolic syndrome and diabetes. All of these benefits serve to keep your ticker ticking and your mind sharp. Moreover, dietary professionals now agree that meat alternatives such as nuts, seeds, legumes, beans, and tofu can provide valuable and affordable sources of protein and other nutrients otherwise found in meats. Mediterranean diets have gone mainstream. To elaborate this, From prominent public figures like Ellen DeGeneres and Bill Gates, to large corporations like WeWorks, there is growing support for the movement to eat more plant-based foods.
In addition to this, eating more plants would reduce the impact of climate change. Food production is responsible for up to 30 percent of total greenhouse gas emissions, with animal products accounting for the vast majority about three-quarters of these effects. Furthermore, agriculture land consume 70 percent of freshwater use whereas producing just a pound of beef requires 1,800 gallons of water therefore this diet is also beneficial to save water. Last but not least, it play a significant role to boost up the economy. For instance, economic activity in the US’s plant-based foods industry alone amounts to sales of approximately $13.7 billion a year. At current growth rates, the plant-based food industry is predicted to generate $13.3 billion in tax revenues over the next 10 years. Sales of plant-based foods in the United States is increasing by an average of 8% per year.
To conclude this, vegetarian diet helps to keep away from serious health issues and maintain our metabolism. It also protect the environment from dangerous gases emission and also improve the economy status of the entire world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2893258427 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79030160468 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662921348315 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1603574202 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.764705882 106.682146367 104% => OK
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Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569040946412 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486995369738 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130010363419 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455047868595 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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