Some people believe that sports is an essential part of school life for children, while others feel that it should be purely optional . discuss these opposing views and give your opinion.
While it is believed by certain demographics of society that outdoor games are a significant part for schooling pupils, critics argue that there should be a choice in it. Eventhought both the conflicting perceptions have their own justification, i strongly agree with the former one.
This is fairly easy to comprehend why some people are in harmony with the latter one. The preponderant reason is distance from sports events lead to time saving. This is simply because if a child devote its maximum time in academic events ,it will help him to enrich his academic grades which is also much more important for some parents than their children's performance. To exemplify it, usually science stream students show resistance to outdoor games because they need to study for 12-14 hours to get up to scratch performance. Inshort , schooling without outdoor games helps one to focus on narrow subjects.
Meanwhile, there are some masses including me, who criticize this suggestion and acknowledge that opting physical education as the additional subject helps the students to stay emotionally and physically fit. As whenever a juvenile do some physical activities,it will not only give them positive wives to deal with boredom but also improve the leadership qualities, patience and discipline etcetera . For exemple ,it can be seen that any person who do outdoor exercises always remain calm and try to keep their surroundings humorous. Thus, sports should not be non compulsory.
To conclude that, although resistance to sports have its own benefits ,it keeps the pupil's environment healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30434782609 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81113838842 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683794466403 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5404182734 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.833333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149685155019 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580806967214 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055318774957 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879047162747 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425431361421 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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