It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is the best for the individual and for society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement
Nowadays, marrying a person at what age is becoming a crucial decision for each and every individual. Unlike the past, people married before 30, at present getting married at the age of 30 is not prefered by numerous fellows. Thus, many times it is said by the proponents that humans should be encouraged to marry before they reach to age of 30 because it is advantageous for that person along with whole community. After a close scrutiny of both the sides, i totally disagree with the statement because it can only increase the divorce rate and financial burden. This view shall be elaborated upon in the ensuing paragraph.
To begin with, out of the all reasons, the most valid argument of my openion is that due to the early marraige of youngsters, the diverce rate across the globe is increasing day by day because of lack of understanding between couples. To cite an example, the survey was conducted in a city of India, which is Mumbai, to calculate the last decade rate of divorce. As a consequece, it was found that the divorce rate had raised by 20% as compared to that of previous decade.
Moving to the next notion of my argument, along with divorce rates, financial capabilities is also a major concern if mankind marry at the early age. Moreover, if a person is not able to afford the spend of their wife or their husband, they ended up being a victim of financial burden. For instance, in my familily, as per the tradition my nephew, Krisha, has married at the age of 26. Consequently, his husband is suffering from lack of momry. He can not feed theris family from earned money.
In contrast, along with benefits of this matter, it is indeed a fact that if a person do not get marry in their thirties, he or she will not be able to plan a family because of gynecological health issues such as lowered sperm density and irregularity in manstruation cycle.
To put it in a Nutshell, human beings being married in thirties will witness more responsibility at early age and face lack of understanding with their spouce.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in contrast, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6703601108 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68961232745 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548476454294 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8837142976 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.4 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24679389407 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744415670466 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074514669712 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124680050453 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106584639086 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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