With tremendous advancements in technology, it is indeed that online shopping has become a popular practice among the majority of the public. This essay discusses the causes of this trend and further focuses on its influence on the shops and communities.
Two major reasons turn out to be crowd pullers in this case. One of the major features of online shopping is its ease of accessibility which is drawing people into buying through the web. Customers can buy a product with a mere swipe or click of fingers. For instance, to place an order all it needs to be done is just select the product and confirming an order. Moreover, the variety of products present on the websites has been intriguing the buyers. Literally, thousands of versions and designs of a commodity can be seen and even compared within no time. Let us consider a situation, when a consumer visits a shop in person he or she can only go through a very less number of products. All these reasons constitute the success of online shopping.
However, though this trend is greatly advantageous from a consumer's point of view, it is causing some serious damage to businesses and manufacturing groups. As the frequency of buying online increased the number of customers visiting shops has declined these days. Consequently, losses are inevitable and small-scale businesses cannot afford to withstand this situation. For illustration, since the sale of clothing on the internet started the little textile shops and handloom shops are on the verge of extinction. In addition, shops cannot cope up with this heavy competition and have been slowly decreasing in numbers as time passes. For example, there is a sharp decline in footwear showrooms in the past few years as most of them are being sold online.
In the overview, Online shopping is definitely a significant advancement in the perspective of time consumption. However, it is posing a threat to shops and communities making them harder to run.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92073170732 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76361482925 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57012195122 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 328.0 20.2975951904 1616% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1614.0 106.682146367 1513% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 328.0 20.7667163134 1579% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 79.0 7.06120827912 1119% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348164788208 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.348164788208 0.084324248473 413% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236048719493 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396934667662 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 165.7 13.0946893788 1265% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -261.44 50.2224549098 -521% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 131.2 11.3001002004 1161% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.74 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.9 8.58950901804 278% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 133.2 10.1190380762 1316% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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