In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
In this fast-growing world, non other than education plays a crucial role in each and every individual's life. Unlike the past, people pursued their higher education from the universities of their own country, at present due to the development of education system of other territories, folks are getting their degree from university of abroad. Considering positive and nagative side of this matter, it is apparent that obtaining higher education in non-home nations have equal pros and cons. This view shall be elaborated upon in the ensuing paragraph.
To beging with, discussing the constructive influences, the first and foremost merit of this trend lies in the fact that if students elect to study abroad for second secondary education than they will be offered a plethora of job offers at the end of their studies as compared to that of own country. To cite and example, my nephew named Aarchi acquired her bechlor of engineering in Mechanical stream from a well-known university of canada and obtained a production engineer job in LNG, a Canadian industry. In addition, the second benefit of study abroad would be that children are offered a chance to explore the other education resources across the globe and they might also learn to live independant.
However, there are many bounds of ensuring education in various territories, the major one stems from the fact that gaining degree from universities or non-home nations could impact on own culture and tradition. In this manner, the importance and value of own cultural history as well as tradition get vanished from the international students' life. Furthermore, Next demerit could be economic contribution towards home territory. Subsequently, if mankind want to opt abroad study, he or she will directly benefit other countries education system as they tend to pay their education fees. For an instance, at present, many students are applying to study in USA, as a consequence, government of United States will be benefited with an economic growth.
To put it in a Nutshell, it is truly evident that getting education outside from home country has fruitful advantages such as more employment offer along with independancy. However, numerous disadvantages has also been considered.
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- In the past when students did a university degree they tended to study in their own country Nowadays they have more opportunity to study abroad What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development You should use your own ideas knowledge and exper 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, well, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15877437326 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78343655023 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554317548747 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 359.0 20.2975951904 1769% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1852.0 106.682146367 1736% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 359.0 20.7667163134 1729% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 94.0 7.06120827912 1331% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247563938617 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.247563938617 0.084324248473 294% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144735848898 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438806861511 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 182.4 13.0946893788 1393% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -301.37 50.2224549098 -600% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 144.5 11.3001002004 1279% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.13 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 25.49 8.58950901804 297% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 62.0 9.78957915832 633% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 145.6 10.1190380762 1439% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 62.0 10.7795591182 575% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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