You recently discovered that there are plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the local authority.
In your letter, you should tell:
• explain how you knew about the plans
• describe the negative effect of the construction on your neighborhood
• suggest a possible solution to the problem.
Dear Sir,
I am penning down this epistle to draw your attention towards this recent project of building an airport in “Green Park locality” which I assume would be a cause of concern for the localities.
Yesterday, when I was surfing the e-newspaper on my mobile, this news about the commencement of construction of this new airport took my interest. Initially, I got quite fascinated with the fact that this is a step towards development of the area, but, unfortunately, I got worried once I read the whole article.
There were multiple things that were concerning. First of all, the article stated that the area of community centre in west will be demolished to give space to the airport which is disturbing as this is the only place where not only kids enjoy their leisure time but also the adult and elderly come to spend some quality time with their peers. Besides this, I regret to say that the tranquillity of the area will vanish as the hustle and bustle of travellers along with the noise of airplanes would cause multifarious issues in vicinity.
Thereby, I, as a reputed member of society, request you from all of us that reconsideration of this project should be done. We, too, desire to have growth of the area but not at the stake of peace. Even, I would also like to suggest the relocation of this airport as 20 miles away from our locality, there is barren land which can be utilized without harming anything.
Hoping for your positive action onto this matter.
Yours faithfully, 30th March,2021
Mary Andrew.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 190, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be a cause of concern for the localities Yesterday when I was surfing the enewspa...
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Line 4, column 33, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...rticle There were multiple things that were concerning First of all the article stated that th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 266.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68421052632 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53557424495 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601503759398 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 290.88556701 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 266.0 16.3608247423 1626% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1246.0 76.5299724578 1628% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 266.0 16.8248392259 1581% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 47.0 4.34317383033 1082% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127681079677 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127681079677 0.0766984524023 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806003345469 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472202565691 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 133.6 8.37731958763 1595% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -190.05 70.7449484536 -269% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 105.9 7.45979381443 1420% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.34 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.51 7.59969072165 270% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 8.62886597938 684% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 108.4 8.54432989691 1269% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 59.0 8.15463917526 724% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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