If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study,
what would you choose? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and
details.
To find opportunity to study in a choice able subject is very luck able incidences. If I were found that type of opportunity, I would chose medicinal biotechnology. I choose this subject due to several reasons. I will develop my idea in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, one of the reasons for my choosing this subject is that it has various application. By taking knowledge from this subject one can contribute to different aspect of life. The subject medicinal biotechnology teaches us how to use the medicine through biotechnology. It has less side effect and more selective action. I have to admit my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my personal example. I remember when I read in university my one of my friend read in MBBS in a renown medical college. When he had the opportunity to chose the subject for his higher study, he chosed medicinal biotechnology. When I asked him about the chosing this subject , he said that in future almost all medicine would be applied by using this technique. Again he said that the knowledge of medicinal biotechnology helps a doctor to treat a patient more easily and selectively. So it was very important for me to chose this subject to learn different new things for my carrier.
Secondly, why I illustrate my specific thought is that to develop my financial condition medicinal biotechnology is very essential. Because in this high technological era this subject has very lucrable opportunity to find handsome job. My personal example is a compelling illustration of this. I remember when I read in college, I regularly submitted different scientific articles to different renown journals and also read different articles from the journals. I found in one of the article that in USA and in UK different pharmaceutical companies seeked the employees whose have the knowledge of medicinal biotechnology and they paid those person a noticeable salary. My one of my elder cousin applied for that job and found the job with very high salary. If he had not the knowledge of medicinal biotechnology , he would have never found that type of job. It is clear to see that to find a job with higher salary, one should read medicinal biotechnology.
To sum up, from the light of above reasons, I strongly believe that medicinal biotechnology is very attractive subject. Because it helps to earn high salary and it has very high profile application.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1983.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8842364532 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96109210289 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42118226601 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 661.5 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 406.0 20.1344086022 2016% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1983.0 100.406767564 1975% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 406.0 20.6045352989 1970% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 46.0 5.45110844103 844% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.5376344086 632% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11862790722 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11862790722 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948387403739 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593782820869 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 204.6 11.7677419355 1739% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -340.61 58.1214874552 -586% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 161.6 10.1575268817 1591% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.5 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 26.46 8.01818996416 330% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 10.002688172 600% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 164.4 10.0537634409 1635% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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