The restoration of older buildings in major cities throughout the world involve enormous expenditures. This money would bring more benefits if it was used to provide new housing and road development. To what extend do you agree or not.
The huge amount of money spend on rehabilitation of conventional building structures in prominent cities of world. This amount would lead to more beneficial effect if it was utilized on development in term of constructing residential societies and road network. I don't agree with this point, the reason is that the restoration of historical buildings flourishing tourism and preserving culture, on the other hand better living standards by developing infrastructure is also important but not on other things expense.
As expenses bear by country on reconditioning of older buildings in bigger parts of world are enormous, and better to spend this money on forming new structure and transportation network. Firstly, the money spend on renovation of historical building would pay off by revenue generated by tourists come from all over the world to watch it. And this amount used on maintained and rebuilding of damaged parts to conserve it. For example, million of people from all over the world visit India each year to watch Taj Mahal was built by Mughal Empire in 18 century. As a result country is earning profit by tourism and it take as a form of industry. The country which spending on its historical pre serve know expenditures are less then earning from it.
Another important prospect is in this way country is protecting its culture and traditions. The new generation would aware of its historical background and when learn about it in books could experience in real life. Although technology have advancement in all fields but older architecture is rare and astonishing because how man its created such a huge structure without mechanical support. For instance great pyramids of Egypt's are surprising human how such a structure could constructs.
However, advances in new residential area and transport network is also important because population of world is increasing and demand also enhanced. But government and countries should made other policies and allocates funds for infrastructure development without criticizing on other site whom money allocated.
In conclusion, it would have more advantages if money spend on infrastructure construction such as roads and houses rather than on rebuilding older constructions in the would. According to my point of view its not agreeable because of its point attraction for potential visitors and associated with country roots and bases. But formation of contemporary buildings and road to meet the need of population in world by separate funds or money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2092.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01179348562 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5175 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.0 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 400.0 20.2975951904 1971% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2092.0 106.682146367 1961% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 400.0 20.7667163134 1926% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 131.0 7.06120827912 1855% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241616744249 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.241616744249 0.084324248473 287% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130773589644 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659803292039 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 203.2 13.0946893788 1552% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -334.52 50.2224549098 -666% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 159.3 11.3001002004 1410% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.53 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 27.42 8.58950901804 319% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 62.0 9.78957915832 633% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 162.0 10.1190380762 1601% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 62.0 10.7795591182 575% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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