The maps show a road system as it is now and the proposed changes in future to reduce the number of accidents.
The layouts provide data on a current road system and plans for the upcoming changes to minimize the number of accidents in the future. Looking at the maps, it can be seen clearly that there is a large roundabout at the intersection of the city road and forest road and then the appearance of many traffic lights to protect the safety of traffic participants.
At the present time, the road system on the map appears some areas of frequent accidents, but all of them have been markedly changed in future. Frequent accident near school will be addressed by traffic lights around the intersection between low land and city road. In addition, there are frequent accidents where city road meets forest road opposite supermarket, so there is the appearance of the roundabout in the upcoming change of the road system to remove accidents.
The elimination of the road leading to the supermarket which is connected to the city road and replacing it by the new road connected with roundabout, prevents frequent accidents around this area. On the other hand, the proposed road system has no any significant changes where people also experience frequent accidents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...otect the safety of traffic participants At the present time the road system on t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...e of the road system to remove accidents The elimination of the road leading to t...
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...other hand the proposed road system has no any significant changes where people al...
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...eople also experience frequent accidents
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93264248705 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63999679471 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507772020725 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 193.0 22.4926829268 858% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 952.0 112.824112599 844% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 193.0 22.9334400587 842% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 61.0 5.23603664747 1165% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370131762895 0.215688989381 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.370131762895 0.103423049105 358% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27058368992 0.15604864568 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286607300044 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 98.3 13.2329268293 743% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -115.96 61.2550243902 -189% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 77.4 10.3012195122 751% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.5 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.07 8.06136585366 199% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 11.4329268293 464% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 79.2 10.9970731707 720% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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