In the past, people usually stayed in one place throughout their life. These days, people often move around. They often live in several different places in their lifetime. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both?
In the past, people often move around many places to change their life. So become a person in the pastime is really difficult.
All most of things have two sides. There are advantages and disadvantages. Following me, there are four main benefits. Firstly, we will have many condition to take partpaticipe in and learn many subjects we love. So we can be a good learner in our class. Secondly, we will take the best education. It is so easy to take many information about education. Thirdly, when we work in the company, we will take the high salary. I think it is really good that people can support their family. Finally, it is very easy to learn in foreign countries. Because when we become the best students in the university, we will take a big reward is go to other countries to learn how to do something.
Besides many benefits , there are many disadvantages. Firstly, if we move around in anywhere, we will alone. We don't have anyone to share many bads and happier in our life. It's boring that we are alone. Secondly, we will become the person with austism. We can do everything like take the end of our life. It is really dangerous. I am afraid of that because for myself, I am a person who always plays alone.
In conclusion, moving to anywhere also have many advantages and disadvantages
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, i think, in conclusion, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47210300429 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4670161063 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480686695279 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 233.0 20.2975951904 1148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1042.0 106.682146367 977% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 233.0 20.7667163134 1122% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 125.0 7.06120827912 1770% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113487680138 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113487680138 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133388857021 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127110482572 0.056905535591 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 116.1 13.0946893788 887% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -156.56 50.2224549098 -312% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 93.0 11.3001002004 823% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.13 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.23 8.58950901804 201% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 95.2 10.1190380762 941% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 93.0 10.7795591182 863% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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