Behavior in schools is getting worse. explain the causes of this problem and suggest some possible solutions.
The behavior of a child can mirror a significant scope of who they are as a person. Many, including myself, believe that children nowadays reflect a higher proportion of negative behavior, especially in school settings. In this essay, I will discuss possible reasons for this violent attitude, while providing two possible solutions that I believe will reduce the severity of the situation greatly.
Among many reasons, the negative influence of media and lack of parental guidance can stand out much more significantly as for reasons why teenagers in the present act the way they do. Social media and coming of age movies tend to portray the bully as cool and popular. This delivers a negative message and promotes violence as it tells these growing children that being nice is a characteristic of the lower social class when in reality being humble is the greatest quality of all. Due to an increasingly busy lifestyle, parents find it challenging to spend time with their children. This can lead to a lack of guidance of these children, increasing their risk of going astray. Adolescent teens seek constant validation and attention, therefore when their parent does not provide this sufficiently, they tend to behave badly in school to regain this lost attention.
Despite all these causes, there are indeed pathways to reduce the negative consequences. Firstly, parents should monitor the type of media their kids are exposed to. It is the parents’ responsibility to teach their kids why what is portrayed in the media is wrong. For an instance, when watching a movie that glorifies the bully, the parents can take action to explain how bullying can hurt other feelings and impact in a negative way while enlightening their children about core values such as compassion. Another possible solution is teaching effective communication in school as well as encouraging students to participate in campaigns that help develop essential skills such as empathy. Research reflects that the primary reason for the rise of many conflicts is lack of communication and hence by developing such skills and learning to see problems from other’s perspectives can help kids understand other’s actions and hence reducing violent behavior.
The way one acts in certain situations can directly reflect their personality and values. Although media and parental neglect can negatively encourage a kid’s bad behavior, it is not avoidable. By parents and teachers helping kids develop various skills that help them tackle different situations with minimum negative consequences from a young age, I believe that majority of the worse behavior experienced in schools can be minimized.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 391, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce the severity of the situation greatly Among many reasons the negative influenc...
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Line 2, column 546, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spending'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: spending
...y lifestyle parents find it challenging to spend time with their children This can lead ...
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...dia their kids are exposed to It is the parents responsibility to teach their kids why ...
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Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ying can hurt other feelings and impact in a negative way while enlightening their children about...
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Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a kid' or simply 'kids'?
Suggestion: a kid; kids
...rental neglect can negatively encourage a kids bad behavior it is not avoidable By par...
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Line 4, column 431, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... experienced in schools can be minimized
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, as for, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2205.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 426.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17605633803 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75462157167 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523474178404 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 692.1 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 426.0 20.2975951904 2099% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2205.0 106.682146367 2067% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 426.0 20.7667163134 2051% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 82.0 7.06120827912 1161% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157296670205 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157296670205 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106184595895 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504736696481 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 216.0 13.0946893788 1650% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -360.91 50.2224549098 -719% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 169.4 11.3001002004 1499% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.24 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 28.99 8.58950901804 338% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 172.4 10.1190380762 1704% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 391, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce the severity of the situation greatly Among many reasons the negative influenc...
^^^
Line 2, column 546, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spending'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: spending
...y lifestyle parents find it challenging to spend time with their children This can lead ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...dia their kids are exposed to It is the parents responsibility to teach their kids why ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ying can hurt other feelings and impact in a negative way while enlightening their children about...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a kid' or simply 'kids'?
Suggestion: a kid; kids
...rental neglect can negatively encourage a kids bad behavior it is not avoidable By par...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 431, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... experienced in schools can be minimized
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, as for, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2205.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 426.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17605633803 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75462157167 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523474178404 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 692.1 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 426.0 20.2975951904 2099% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2205.0 106.682146367 2067% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 426.0 20.7667163134 2051% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 82.0 7.06120827912 1161% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157296670205 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157296670205 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106184595895 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504736696481 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 216.0 13.0946893788 1650% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -360.91 50.2224549098 -719% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 169.4 11.3001002004 1499% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.24 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 28.99 8.58950901804 338% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 172.4 10.1190380762 1704% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.