Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have various type of financial problem, and they have various views. Some people, believe, people who financially weak and unlike with their professional that time adopt any circumstances job, while, others think people should survive and overcome with this problem. I agree with the former view and I articulated both prospective in subsequent paragraphs.
On the one hand, Many circumstances are becoming worse for people. Such as lack of money and don't like their job. Moreover, People, who become a bankrupt that time without any work not finish their debt, and a person doing work in any circumstances. Such as low pay, lack of promotion opportunities. So, They are tolerating all things. Additionally, people accept a bad situation because some time they learn, how to solve this problem? It is beneficial for them and learn how to manage a worse situation.
On the other hand, When People can try to overcome and solve the problem always get good lifestyle for their professional career. People, who is doing work in low pay job, however, in market in many various types of job available, which is getting good wages instead of old one. That a time person should try to find a new job, and they can develop new skills, which useful to cope with that situation. Like wise, People, who suffer from bad health and affected by obesity, they are trying to; adopt good and healthy diet, do exercise and cope with problems, hence, that is becoming good success with hard struggle.
To conclude, Although, People have a number of time reason to live in bad situation, It is beneficial for them. But overcome the problems, it will be getting good for long run and people should solve the hazardous from their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92413793103 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58183796375 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541379310345 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5252066503 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.25 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143659637381 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524973670536 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506190429141 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878754260753 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312247014811 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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