Some people argue holding sporting events is beneficial to a country's development. Other people hold the opposite opinion. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
Covid-19 pandemic is putting burden on many people in the world, however it can not lessen the heat of Olympic Tokyo 2021, which has been postponed for a year. Though people highly support and think sporting events like this is beneficial to a country's development, some advocate their vehement disagreement.
To start with, it is undeniable that holding sporting events offer golden opportunity to stimulate a nation in various fields. The first one I must mention is tourism. Reasonably enough, the whole events together with side activities will be broadcasted through the entire planet. It stands to reason that if goverment and companies can take advantages of this chance to spread appealling, beautiful scene or culture to every conners of the world, that nation will definitely see a upsurge in income. Moreover, the interest coming from retailing tickets and copyright will be gigantic, exceed any expenditure of investing into holding events. Not to mention, to meet the facility criteria , each country need to upgrade infrastructure, which later will benefit dwellers and athletes there.
However, holding sporting events can be detrimental as it consume a large sum of money, even transcend intended amount. Take Olympic Tokyo as an example, due to being put off for a year long, the total cost gas nearly doubled expected budget. In the case of Olympic Rio, after the events ended, many newly-built and intact infrastructure are left useless. Such a waste of money. Worse still, some country not only show pleasant but terrible and shocking side as well. I can cite Olympic Rio. Arriving at Rio, athletes and tourists need to pass many slums with rundown household.
From my perapective holding sporting events is one-of-a-kind chance for a country's development. To take the most out of it we will need proper strategy. First, we need tackle with onerous obstacles. Also we should apply facility into use, avoidind stepping in Rio's footprint.
In conclusion, holding sporting events will be beneficial if we can reconcile every elements for a auspicious result.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23652694611 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76142153157 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625748502994 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.6282839508 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.45 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172050021568 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049019802486 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623296909793 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108398880666 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03761733014 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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