Education should be accessible to people of all economic backgrounds. All levels of education, from primary school to tertiary education should be free. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that people of different social class should be able to fee-freely access to all levels of education, from primary school to high education. From my own perspective, I completely agree with this notion given positive outcome this charge-free educating system bring.
To start with, that education is made accessible to all citizens will guarantee a settled future for younger generation since obviously, educations offer individuals fundamental knowledge to keep abreast with current worldwide tremendous changes in a wide array of fields. Besides, needless to say, the society is on the threshold of 4.0 industry and highly demands for ingenuous person who are capable of devising originalities to contribute to the overall development. To illustrate, it is sufficiently apparent that since the advent automatic technology, thousands of blue-collar workers have been made redundant and substituted by robots, whereas, the contrast scenario has happened with white-collar counterparts with souring numbers of occupations, especially in IT field. Therefore, it stands to reason that people who pursuit a well-rounded educational system will likely to have a more propitious life than those of superficial knowledge.
Second of all, via equally distributing education to people from all economic backgrounds, each nations will no longer need to suffer from the waste of talent. Nowadays, there are numerous gifted students who have to stop studying after graduating from high school due to their financial condition. If those students were given the opportunity to take the tertiary education, the society would presumably make even further progress.
In conclusion, due to aforementioned advantages, it is crucial for education to be made available to all citizens regardless of their background.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, second, so, therefore, well, whereas, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66911764706 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13113584474 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658088235294 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.7608713346 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.2 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328741255775 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114786509799 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968394496212 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205454127785 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765401129115 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.07 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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