Education is the fundamental right of a child. It leads to an individual progress. Although many people believe that our government should too much money invest in teaching science is good. I think in a reverse manner and disagree to the given statement. My inclination is justified in the following paragraphs.
Out of all arguments, the strongest one to prove my view is government should invest more money in the technology level than other subject is more effective for children. This is to 3 Science and Technology has increased each and every fields. A good example for this is mobile phone. It is very utility for everyone, it can keep directly connect to each other. Besides this it is also true that science is the most impact on the country economy such as the computer is a involving into a offices, business work , schools, homes and so on.
The other reason to prove my point is, some multinational companies are built the new company is he outside world like an Apple, Microsoft software, Samsung and so on. which create a new jobs. Therefore serveal people can get a easily job. so people should learn teaching science.
On the contrary, some people counter claim the mentioned support the foremost argument they do is other subjects like dance arts and musics is a more interesting and exciting.Many people are more intelligent about this activities and it is bring us happiness.Arts and music is identification to our country.Afterwards this type of activity can be remove our all worries and make me feel happy.
To conclude, I discussed and after I would said that, I disagree to the given statement because government should invest some funds into a same parts.
- Housing shortage in big cities can cause severe social consequences Some people think only government action can solve this problem To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Palazzo rounded by advertising which has an increase in effect on our life do you think the positive effects of the outweigh the negative effects 73
- Some people say that what children watch on TV influences their behaviour while others say the amount of time children they spend watching Tv influences their behavior most discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- The restoration of old buildings in major cities around the world costs enormous amount of money This money would be better spent on providing new housing and road development To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- People can eat a wide variety of food from other regions As a result they are eating a lot of foreign food instead of locally produced food Do you think the advantages of eating foreign foods are more than their harms 56
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'individual progress'.
Suggestion: individual progress
...ndamental right of a child. It leads to an individual progress. Although many people believe that our ...
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Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ld. It leads to an individual progress. Although many people believe that our government...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a reverse manner" with adverb for "reverse"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...st in teaching science is good. I think in a reverse manner and disagree to the given statement. My...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Science' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'Sciences'.
Suggestion: Sciences
...re effective for children. This is to 3 Science and Technology has increased each and e...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... phone. It is very utility for everyone, it can keep directly connect to each oth...
^^
Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
...an keep directly connect to each other. Besides this it is also true that science is th...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mpact on the country economy such as the computer is a involving into a offices, ...
^^
Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ountry economy such as the computer is a involving into a offices, business work...
^
Line 3, column 490, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ch as the computer is a involving into a offices, business work , schools, home...
^
Line 3, column 490, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a office' or simply 'offices'?
Suggestion: a office; offices
...ch as the computer is a involving into a offices, business work , schools, homes and so...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 514, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... involving into a offices, business work , schools, homes and so on. The other...
^^
Line 3, column 525, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...into a offices, business work , schools, homes and so on. The other reason to ...
^^
Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... The other reason to prove my point is, some multinational companies are built t...
^^
Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'job'?
Suggestion: job
..., Samsung and so on. which create a new jobs. Therefore serveal people can get a eas...
^^^^
Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ung and so on. which create a new jobs. Therefore serveal people can get a easily job. so...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... jobs. Therefore serveal people can get a easily job. so people should learn teac...
^
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('easily') instead an adjective, or a noun ('job') instead of another adjective.
... jobs. Therefore serveal people can get a easily job. so people should learn teaching scienc...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...re serveal people can get a easily job. so people should learn teaching science. ...
^^
Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to teach'.
Suggestion: to teach
...et a easily job. so people should learn teaching science. On the contrary, some peo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n teaching science. On the contrary, some people counter claim the mentioned ...
^^
Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ople counter claim the mentioned support the foremost argument they do is other s...
^^
Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Many
...sics is a more interesting and exciting.Many people are more intelligent about this ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
....Many people are more intelligent about this activities and it is bring us happiness...
^^^^
Line 7, column 243, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
...lligent about this activities and it is bring us happiness.Arts and music is identifi...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 262, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Arts
...activities and it is bring us happiness.Arts and music is identification to our coun...
^^^^
Line 7, column 310, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Afterwards
... music is identification to our country.Afterwards this type of activity can be remove our...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 44, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'say'
Suggestion: say
...conclude, I discussed and after I would said that, I disagree to the given statement...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, therefore, i think, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91958041958 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86469215949 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597902097902 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 91.040856213 49.4020404114 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9375 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294738553525 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776234207342 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629652093364 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144481913843 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435679783601 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'individual progress'.
Suggestion: individual progress
...ndamental right of a child. It leads to an individual progress. Although many people believe that our ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ld. It leads to an individual progress. Although many people believe that our government...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a reverse manner" with adverb for "reverse"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...st in teaching science is good. I think in a reverse manner and disagree to the given statement. My...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Science' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'Sciences'.
Suggestion: Sciences
...re effective for children. This is to 3 Science and Technology has increased each and e...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... phone. It is very utility for everyone, it can keep directly connect to each oth...
^^
Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
...an keep directly connect to each other. Besides this it is also true that science is th...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mpact on the country economy such as the computer is a involving into a offices, ...
^^
Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ountry economy such as the computer is a involving into a offices, business work...
^
Line 3, column 490, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ch as the computer is a involving into a offices, business work , schools, home...
^
Line 3, column 490, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a office' or simply 'offices'?
Suggestion: a office; offices
...ch as the computer is a involving into a offices, business work , schools, homes and so...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 514, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... involving into a offices, business work , schools, homes and so on. The other...
^^
Line 3, column 525, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...into a offices, business work , schools, homes and so on. The other reason to ...
^^
Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... The other reason to prove my point is, some multinational companies are built t...
^^
Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'job'?
Suggestion: job
..., Samsung and so on. which create a new jobs. Therefore serveal people can get a eas...
^^^^
Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ung and so on. which create a new jobs. Therefore serveal people can get a easily job. so...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... jobs. Therefore serveal people can get a easily job. so people should learn teac...
^
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('easily') instead an adjective, or a noun ('job') instead of another adjective.
... jobs. Therefore serveal people can get a easily job. so people should learn teaching scienc...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...re serveal people can get a easily job. so people should learn teaching science. ...
^^
Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to teach'.
Suggestion: to teach
...et a easily job. so people should learn teaching science. On the contrary, some peo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n teaching science. On the contrary, some people counter claim the mentioned ...
^^
Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ople counter claim the mentioned support the foremost argument they do is other s...
^^
Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Many
...sics is a more interesting and exciting.Many people are more intelligent about this ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
....Many people are more intelligent about this activities and it is bring us happiness...
^^^^
Line 7, column 243, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
...lligent about this activities and it is bring us happiness.Arts and music is identifi...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 262, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Arts
...activities and it is bring us happiness.Arts and music is identification to our coun...
^^^^
Line 7, column 310, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Afterwards
... music is identification to our country.Afterwards this type of activity can be remove our...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 44, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'say'
Suggestion: say
...conclude, I discussed and after I would said that, I disagree to the given statement...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, therefore, i think, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91958041958 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86469215949 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597902097902 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 91.040856213 49.4020404114 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9375 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294738553525 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776234207342 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629652093364 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144481913843 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435679783601 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.