Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you well. You are receiving this letter from the general motors company that has been arranging its meeting in your hotel for almost 3 months in a row.
Firstly, we are grateful for the second to none services you have provided our guests with, neatly and flawlessly. Our guests are satisfied with the hotel staffs who are really helpful and polite. Along with this the participants in our meeting entirely surprised with nice comfortable types of furniture that are available in the sky lounge as they do not be fatigue after long hours of seating. we cannot also ignore the breathtaking view of the city which can be seen from the meeting hall and the relaxed friendly atmosphere of your hotel. The facilities for our guests are adequate and up-to-date.
It would be your immense kindness if you check over the quality of your hotel food services as we have earned some negative comments on your hotels' food from our guests. To highlight one our guests have not really found the ingredients in your meals healthy and fresh. To be exact, some of our guests have said the foods are smelly and design carelessly. Moreover, one they have ordered an Australian cuisine however it was not really the thing they expected as this food is normally chilly and cold but the hotel's chef has served it totally different from the original one. To add on, appetizers and desserts in your hotel are not really various to choose.
I believe there are some measures to tackle this issue. You can check the freshness and healthiness of primary ingredients with the food department. Also, it would be great if you could ask the chef to consider a vast variety of desserts and appetizers.
Thanks for your time and consideration.
you could kindly inform us about this issue via e-mail at hivafara.
we are await to earn your feedback.
Respectfully yours,
san jane, general motor's coordinated manager
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...be fatigue after long hours of seating. we cannot also ignore the breathtaking vie...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'hotels'' or 'hotel's'?
Suggestion: hotels'; hotel's
...ood is normally chilly and cold but the hotels chef has served it totally different fr...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...nks for your time and consideration. you could kindly inform us about this issue...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...t this issue via e-mail at hivafara. we are await to earn your feedback. Respe...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'awaited'.
Suggestion: awaited
...issue via e-mail at hivafara. we are await to earn your feedback. Respectfully yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.48453608247 240% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 937.175257732 173% => OK
No of words: 333.0 206.0 162% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85585585586 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 3.78020617076 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47978598426 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 127.690721649 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561561561562 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 290.88556701 170% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.23451053 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1052631579 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5263157895 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.89473684211 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271777037902 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777376080975 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560184541775 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108463042881 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683757364974 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 41.2886597938 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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