The given line graph illustrates the data regarding changes in the monthly temperature of Paris, Dubai and Sydney. This data is calibrated in Celsius.
Looking at the overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the temperature of Dubai and Paris are maximum in the centre months of the year, whereas Sydney temperature is accounted as lowest in this period.
Having a glimpse at the illustration reveals that the temperature of Sydney start from 5degree Celsius in January and caught up to 15degree Celsius till May as compared to the temperature of Sydney is 25degree Celsius in January and become 15degree Celsius in a may. The figure of Dubai is parallel to Paris, with more than 15degree Celsius temperature is excepted in Dubai in January. After that, it rises considerably and touched approximately 30degree Celsius in May.
Shifting to the remaining data, both of the figures of Dubai and Paris start to go up after May and reached 45degre Celsius and 33degree Celsius respectively in July. The growth of Paris temperature remains to stagnate between June and July. These figures are experienced decrement in temperature from August to December, as it decreases from 35 degree Celsius to 20 degree Celsius in Dubai and 20degree celsius to 5 degree Celsius in Paris. Paris shows the reverse figure than the other two given nations. Its temperature grew consistently from 10degree Celcius from the middle month to 23degree Celcius till the end.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, regarding, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12605042017 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76956738418 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487394957983 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 283.868780488 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6461381012 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.909090909 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0826416151052 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399222208847 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399058664026 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716651869581 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291113703177 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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