You have been offer a job overseas. You have a friend who knows the country well. Write a letter to your friend
- Give details of the job
- Why you applied
- Ask a few questions about the country
Dear Mohan,
I am writing to share some exciting news about an employment offer I received yesterday. The position is at an architectural firm in Hamilton, Canada.
As you know, I manage the entire landscaping department at ATC here in India, the offer at Ribor Architects in Hamilton is at a junior level. However, the annual package is around CAN$ 65K and the head of the firm has assured me of excellent growth opportunity as they are looking at expansion into other provinces by next year.
I decided to apply for the job as work experience in Canada can add to my profile and ease the application process for permanent residency. Jia is already at McMaster University, it would be wonderful for us to stay close to our daughter.
Since you have lived in Ontario since ’97, we will need your expertise on the current real estate/housing market. I would also need you to advise me on rental vs purchase of a property. Would you know about the current market conditions in Hamilton considering you lived there 2 years ago?
Let’s catch up over the weekend and talk in detail about our move to Canada. Kindly convey our regards to Meeta and your children.
Your friendly,
Setu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mohan, I am writing to share some exciting news...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sion into other provinces by next year. I decided to apply for the job as work e...
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Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Meeta and your children. Your friendly, Setu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75845410628 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70886585332 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671497584541 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.866718507 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0833333333 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189908270183 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615736125354 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537832264075 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817828734662 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596093857791 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.