In recent years, the family has changed as well as family roles. Why this is happening and is this situation positive or negative?
Change is the rule of nature and there is no iota of doubt that the pattern and the role of the family have changed compared with the last few decades. These changes have both positive and negative impacts on society and the family also. I will discuss both sides and reasons in upcoming paragraphs.
In today's faster era, some major factors are responsible for that type of change in particular transformation in the living standard of humans. For instance, the way of living life is changing rapidly such as a few decades ago, the individual gave priority to live the joint family, while in present time a short family has become a preference for living a happy life. As a result, people have started living alone. Another factor that adds fuel to this fire is the financial condition. In many under-developed countries, the public is surviving below the poverty level, consequently living with a small family is efficient and economical for them.
Furthermore, these changes have certain advantages, however with some drawbacks also. For example, living alone makes humans self-dependent and mentally stronger. Consequently, people learn about moral values and social behavior very soon. On the flip side, living alone makes the bond weaker of family members. For instance, attachment and emotions become fragile to some extent.
To sum up, after mulling up the whole issue, changes in the living standard of human life and their mentality are mainly responsible for transpose in the family pattern. Regardless, it is beneficial in various ways such as human become self-dependent and a social person, except it, has a few limitations also which includes obstructive effects on family bonding.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ative impacts on society and the family also. I will discuss both sides and reasons ...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...advantages, however with some drawbacks also. For example, living alone makes humans...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in particular, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1884057971 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75757725261 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590579710145 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9289244181 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181479937434 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608774950142 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065214224041 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117035233056 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634021448656 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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