Most of the people across globe using internet services gain information of their surrounding. However, print book and newspaper therefore no longer any need. I agree with this perception.
To begin with, Contemporary world need gadgets to gain information on daily bases because people do not have enough time to read long news paper as wellas, print books. To exemplify, people are running across the world are running across the world to deal with their issues in between then if they need any information people can easily access internet to find their solution, it does not take time or money. Moreover, Internet has all the statistics of the world and information are available of every region.
In addition, having a information about only particular period in book as well as , in newspaper they give limited information. For example, Indian books has limited information about current situation of Country not only, books , news papers only give statistics of particular day. While, Internet have early and future projection also to give much more accurate graph of situation to provide reliable information .Books and news papers are no longer be part of information. sector they provide they only provide overview of situation .
In conclusion, nowdays internet provide much more genuine news instead of, news paper and print books, whereas, print books and news papers are now part of entertainment industry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28634361233 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68143516013 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559471365639 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9721345005 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.090909091 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5454545455 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191575416699 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754552520686 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447135169955 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116906856046 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025658606643 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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