It is irrefutable that the production of foods has been proliferating over the years. However, it is considered by many that the only foodstocks which is produced within their own nation should sell in the supermarkets instead of importing it from outside. In my opinion, country must allow the outside foods to be sold in the supermarkets to have some positive effects on the nation. Further, this essay will discuss the useful ways.
Firstly, it is undeniable that in our country, people are more fond of having various types of cuisines. But, our nation has limited types of cuisines, the reason behind this is the lack of raw materials and hence, it is essential to acquire such materials from overseas in order to, provide different styles of foods. For instance, several foreigners arrives in our country especially for having varieties of foodstuffs and thus, to avoid such deficiency of food materials it is requisite to import such resources from outside countries.
Secondly, exchanging the foodstuffs will help to build strong relationships with the overseas countries and also, it will positively affect our country's economy. For example, as per the recent survey from ACI, gdp of the nation has inclined by 3% because of the trading of foodstocks. Nowadays, citizens are bored of such limited or repetitive meals and hence, to bring some unique cuisines among the people it is quite crucial to bring in foods from other countries.
To conclude, selling only foods which are produced in our country will not be effectively beneficial, on the contrary, importing some foodstocks from outside would help our nation economically and socially as well.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ces from outside countries. Secondly, exchanging the foodstuffs will help to b...
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Line 5, column 310, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
...g of foodstocks. Nowadays, citizens are bored of such limited or repetitive meals and he...
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Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...effectively beneficial, on the contrary, importing some foodstocks from outside w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15867158672 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76606603469 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557195571956 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2533085406 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.090909091 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5454545455 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316687941788 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110956183775 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101559813547 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200586810605 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950861194316 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ces from outside countries. Secondly, exchanging the foodstuffs will help to b...
^^
Line 5, column 310, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
...g of foodstocks. Nowadays, citizens are bored of such limited or repetitive meals and he...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...effectively beneficial, on the contrary, importing some foodstocks from outside w...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15867158672 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76606603469 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557195571956 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2533085406 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.090909091 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5454545455 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316687941788 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110956183775 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101559813547 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200586810605 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950861194316 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.