With the development of social media, more and more youngsters are allowed unsupervised access to the internet in order to meet and chat with friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situations. What solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem?
With every invention there is some pros and cons, like in case of digital platform. Nowadays, youth are more inclined towards usage of mobile phones that lead them to access unauthorized websites impacting their thought process at very young age. This can be taken care by counselling kids and involving them in outdoor activities.
To begin with, it has commonly being noticed that in the busy lifestyle, parents do not pay attention towards the involvement of their kids in outdoor activities, rather they give mobile phones to keep them busy. This not only refrain adolescents to get themselves involved in physical exercise but also pushes them to play online with their friends. With the advancement in technologies, now marketing of things are really easy. Kids operating online come across with different websites that can be meant for adults. Besides, growing students capture things very easily and they have curiosity to get the in-depth knowledge this sometime leads to access unauthorized websites. Also, sitting entire day in front of system or handling mobile phone can be harmful for eyes and leads to spectacles at very early age. For instance, in the situation of covid-19 where children cannot go out to play or to study. They have found out plethora of substitute to stay connected with their peers over internet like through whatsapp chat group or playing games like ludo king online.
In order to rectify the problem, the most effective way is to give the proper counselling to your kids. Children should not just understand that it is bad to have all time online access but to know what its implications are. Among all, youngsters should be encouraged to go out and hang around with their friends rather creating chatting groups. For example, a study done by Times of India has given the data that children involved in playing outdoor games are70% healthier by brain and body in comparison with youth staying at home and fiddling with their mobile phones.
To conclude, I would rather say, youngsters are the future and should be physically and mentally fit. This is only possible if they keep themselves away from online activities everytime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are some pros'?
Suggestion: there are some pros
With every invention there is some pros and cons, like in case of digital platf...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, really, so, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06406685237 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53816241584 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590529247911 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9324741363 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.941176471 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1176470588 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219448315567 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676811761254 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328061496881 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12385269417 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526123514678 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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