People nowadays consider water contamination in rivers, lakes and seas as a pressing problem that needs to tackle. This problem causes in several ways. If there is no measure to improve this situation, some detrimental impacts on animal life and human society will happen.
The main factor of water pollution in developing countries is sewage due to the results of the industrial revolution. Many factories don’t concern much about the waste disposal process. Due to high profits, they discharge chemicals directly into the water without any treatments. Furthermore, the exacerbating awareness of local inhabitants throwing away the trash also results in contaminated waterways. Rubbish should be precise location but now scatters at rivers and seas. In addition, oil spillage happening in the oceans cause many devastating effects on aquatic animals.
Some problems can anticipate when our water environment is contaminated. The prospect that we do not have an adequate supply of clean water for daily lives, including drinking, is rising. On the other side, pollutants are eaten by tiny organisms, and these organisms also are consumed by fishes and others. The food chain will disrupt human being health at all levels due to this. Each year, according to the World Health Organization, millions of people in the world suffer from illness caused by dirty water such as diarrhoea and cholera. The pollution of water is to blame for the loss of marine habitats. We might behold massive fishes, crabs and dolphins that depend on water bodies dying in a short period. Consequently, the eco-diversity gradually disappears.
In conclusion, local authorities should be investing more sanitation and raise the awareness of citizens as well as the business owner about the responsibility of rubbish removal.
- In some countries young people have become richer healthier and live longer but they are less happy What are the causes What can be done to address this situation 76
- Some companies sponsor sport as a way to advertise themselves Some people think it is good while others think there are disadvantages Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Nowadays many people cannot read or write What problems does this cause What measures can governments take to solve these problems 84
- People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems Give your opinion 56
- The use of social media is replacing face to face interaction among many people in society Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38869257951 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87626865487 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671378091873 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3176065629 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7222222222 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7222222222 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243127275237 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617914544887 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464070692397 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119677827645 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799992521855 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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