Firstly, the major effects of this are entirely negative. It is clear that people who cannot read and write could not enter into higher education, which deprives them of getting a decent job in the future. This leads to constraining the national development in terms of economy. Furthermore, illiterate people are likely to be cheated and manipulated. For example, in rural areas in Vietnam, hundreds of people have lost their properties as they trust in the fraud without reading official documents while transacting. Thus, as makes clear, these effects need to be countered to develop societies.
To tackle this problem, the government could subsidize the tutor fees for children, who do not have a chance to go to school or drop out of school due to poverty. As evidenced in the northern mountainous areas in Vietnam, the government annually spends a large amount of money from the national budget aiding local education, gradually alleviating the illiteracy there. Apart from caring for the future generation, supplementary classes have been opened to support illiterate adults, thereby helping them get to know words and other kinds of stuff. Thus, encouraging children to go to school via financial support and improving the ability of reading and writing of adults will be foremost measures of this problem.
Following this look, unfortunate trends in the developing world would make society become less thriving. It is hoped that in the near future these nations could decrease the illiteracy rate to a minimum percentage by these initiatives mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, look, so, thus, while, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26294820717 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77126502571 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637450199203 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0234317807 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.083333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179804741557 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584208821736 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444734097661 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106734901183 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318510349799 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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