The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050

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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

The pie charts illustrate the age categorization of population in Yemen and Italy in 2000 and give prediction for the year 2050.
In general, it appears that Yemen has a relatively young generation while the opposite trend is true to Italy.
As shown in the charts, people under 14 accounted for half of the population in Yemen in 2000. Meanwhile, the proportions of those within labor age and over 60 were 46.3 percent and 3.6 percent respectively. Compared to Yemen, the figure of senior citizens in Italy in 2000 was nearly eight times higher than that of Yemen’s with 24.10 percent. The group of people under 14 took up 14.3 percent of Italy’s population and the percentage of those between 15 and 59 was 61.6 percent.
Given the forecasts for the year 2050, the group of citizens under 14 in Yemen is expected to decrease steadily to 37 percent. In contrast, the proportion of those from 15 to 59 years old is likely to increase gradually to 57.30 percent whereas that of those over 60 will almost double to 5.7 percent. Similar to Yemen, the group of people older than 60 years old in Italy is predicted to expand by nearly twice and reach 42.30 percent in 2050. However, the percentages of those in working age and below 14 are projected to decline to 46.20 percent and 11.50 percent respectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, whereas, while, in contrast, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71304347826 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59949100733 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513043478261 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.6310445688 43.030603864 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.4 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296764803964 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140657249689 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144201848251 0.0843802449381 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228498586696 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.185066782738 0.0819641961636 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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