Many famous sports players advertise sports product. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
All the companies always advertise their products via different mediums just to increase their sales. Few of them have chosen numerous celebrities like athletes & sports persons, to endorse their product into the market. There will always be pros and cons to such marketing strategy which will be discussed in following paragraphs.
To start with, adopting this strategy, gives an opportunity to a player to earn extra money apart from his sport. For example, last year due to his large fan following, Hardik Pandya, an Indian cricketer, was hired by a well-known company to endorse their brand for about 200 crores during the Asia Cup. Moreover, the reputation of the product can also be maintained, for instance, Virat Kohli who is often seen promoting an energy drink which he uses during his play. This results in genuine product marketing.
On the other hand, however, if the player becomes money minded (oriented) he would not fact check of the product and may unknowingly end up marketing fake or harmful products. For example, Rohit Sharma, a well-known batsman, was seen advertising tobacco on Indian television. Many people are influenced by the famous personalities and advertising such products may result in harmfulness to the public. Also, player may not perform very well as his focus would have diverted from a sport to the money which may reduce his fam.
To conclude, as long as the authenticity of the advert is maintained and until the product is for good to oneself, such advertisement may benefit to both players and the companies. However, players should always get information of what they will be endorsing and should always stay focused to their play rather than looking at their own benefit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, for example, for instance, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10247349823 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65083556275 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632508833922 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7934013738 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.076923077 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205620628012 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799020732238 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581784996404 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11885316484 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353269478729 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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