Some believe that people should not continue to work once they reach at the age of retirement. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience.
There are many phases of human life and retirement is considered to be one. Some mind supports that once they reach that phase, once should stop working. I totally agree with the statement and will elaborate with examples in upcoming paragraphs.
Generally, when a person attains an age of 60, he is considered to be in phase of retirement. This is standardized by scientist on the basis of many researches, as it is when, normally people face limitations with their physical fitness. During younger age people can do daily activities easily without much effort. Therefore, many different occupations have set various criteria for retirement. For example, a legendary cricketer, Sachin Tendulkar, who has joined the cricket at very younger age, the fitness level at that time was totally different when compared with today and so he has declared retirement from playing the cricket 4 years ago.
Furthermore, after retirement individuals can involve themselves in different activities like raising their grandchildren and nurturing them with the cultural values. They can also engage themselves in practicing yoga and meditation to improve their mental and physical wellness. To illustrate further, according to the recent survey of World Health Organization, people who retire at the age of sixty tend to be 30% happier than those who continue to work after retirement.
To conclude, once individuals reach at the age of retirement they have worked enough and they should spend the rest of their life in activities that make them happy. Moreover, after referring to outcomes of many researches, many countries have made the law for retirement age to be 60. So, it will be foolish act to deny its logic.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21376811594 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84990658598 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597826086957 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7510600028 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.785714286 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225808346749 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730732620034 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639444815628 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14099592347 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318960525508 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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