With the help from technology advancement, people can effortlessly enjoy online concerts from home which results in the less significant urge of viewing them directly. Some advocate the opinion that live shows are no longer necessary; however, this essay totally disagrees what with admiring performances conventionally holds indispensable roles.
For the most part, watching live shows can creates a powerful impression owing to the presence of the artists and the lively surrounding atmosphere. Audiences can easily resonate with the stories and embody the feelings such as agony or joys expressed by the actors. Despite how advanced broadcasting devices can execute, these abstract values will not be fully transmitted to viewers at home. Besides, show-comers may also interact with their favorite celebrities and have priceless memories by having their photos taken with them.
On top of that, maintaining the traditional show is crucial to the source and survival of recorded ones. If it had not for the earnings from distributing concert admissions, online shows would not have been possible due to lacking of budgets. Owing to the increasing expenditures of infrastructure and human resources, so exorbitant is the tickets that it may not cater to everyone. In contrary, new comers and loyal watchers consistently manage to reserve a seat as it is conducive to a lifetime experience and instrumental in supporting the artists. Validation from real viewers sitting in the auditorium can impulse performers noticeably. For instance, if they acting in front of empty lines, there may not be enough motivation to put on a masterpiece.
In conclusion, there are a variety of how audiences can fulfill their aesthetic demand as it has become remarkably convenient by means of mass media and the internet; nevertheless, they pale into significance with engaging in live performances and therefor may never be outweighed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'pale'
Suggestion: pale
...ia and the internet; nevertheless, they pales into significance with engaging in live...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, in conclusion, such as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49632352941 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08541318884 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672794117647 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4351421115 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.909090909 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156633950211 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511960551121 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457651085273 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878019430591 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342326933367 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.98 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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