Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Other believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both of views and give your opinions.
In this day and age, the question of whether residing in rural areas or urban one would lead a healthy lifestyle has sparked a controversy. This essay will discuss both aspects of the argument in details and concretely provide evidences as why city dwellers would get better healthcare.
On the one hand, there are reasons why some hold the view of becoming residents in villages are more beneficial health. Since countryside have more spacious spaces, but less population, residents’ living can be ensured in term of atmosphere. Obviously, the more people live in the same place, the more carbon dioxide are excessively released into air due to using both private and public vehicles. That is one of key factors leading to pollution that have adverse impacts on human’s health related to respiratory system. Hence, rural places’ peaceful and unpolluted atmosphere make an important contribution to have physical health. Furthermore, if people choose to settle in countryside, they can enjoy healthy diets with fresh and organic food. Because those foods may entirely not contain preservation chemicals so as to keep their quality that extremely poisonous to countryside dwellers’ living.
However, I would argue that city dwellers would be provided with many advanced healthcare advantages. Firstly, it finds easier for urban citizens to find any hospitals in their own residential areas in which are equipped with advance facilities to be able treat for patients carefully and effectively. The conveniences are unlikely to find in a countryside. Moreover, big cities are favorable places in which concentrate loads of well-trained doctors, so they are possible to handle with emergency or even complicated cases precisely. With respect to those cases, if people settle in small villages, it would take them several days to be transferred from local clinics to advanced hospital which tend to locate in big cities. This may pose a consider danger to patients.
In conclusion, both kinds of aforementioned living environment have their own advantages. It is better for residents to consider carefully all the pros and cons so that they can make a decision an appropriate place to reside.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
In this day and age, the question of whether residing in rural areas or urban one wo...
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Line 2, column 817, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...rely not contain preservation chemicals so as to keep their quality that extremely poiso...
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Line 3, column 742, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... to locate in big cities. This may pose a consider danger to patients. In conclusion, bo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, as to, in conclusion, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 965.302439024 192% => OK
No of words: 348.0 196.424390244 177% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33045977011 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 3.73543355544 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91908059329 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 106.607317073 203% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 283.868780488 209% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8353941057 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.117647059 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 5.23603664747 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166625981299 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486085675925 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332370574677 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920834365877 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418703806319 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 40.7170731707 270% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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