adaptation when living in new country
In modern society, the issue of commencing a new life in a new country has become a matter for discussion. While it can be argued that immigrants should adhere to the local lifestyle, I only partially agree with this sentiment and I believe foreigners ought to stick to their cultural values. This essay will outline the reason why I think this.
From an overall perspective, there are two main reasons why I agree with the essential of adjusting to the traditional life in the host country. Perhaps the main reason why I am in favor of adapting new traditions is because it can help newcomers with staying away complicated troubles and illegal actions which enable to happen if new residents do not follow. To illustrate, seeing or experiencing strange behaviors that are not socially acceptable would make local people angry and frustrated. For example, Singapore is the best country in terms of cleanliness so if immigrants litter, they will be punished for sure by paying the fee and that actions also make local citizens will feel annoyed. A further point in favor of following new custom and transition is that it is easier for outsiders to get along well with the locals. As a result, expatriates will be accepted and they are capable of gaining respects and affections as well was help from local inhabitants. A good illustration of this is, if foreigners know as much as they can about long-standing values and religious matters of the host community, people in that area will have good first impression on them and the locals are willing to help new comers in any situation.
Despite these arguments, I also feel that people who live in another country should keep their own customs which are suitable to native environment for some reasons. First and foremost, it is impossible for immigrants to completely forget their own culture. That is the reason why they need to practice some of their traditions. For instance, if Vietnamese people commence in the US, they are not necessary to speak English while they are at home with their Vietnamese family. As a consequence, they will be remind about their fatherland and overcome homesickness. Secondly, it is also a good chance to introduce local people about foreigners’ customs and traditions. This opportunity results in cultural assimilation and exchange traditional values between both countries and people in two different communities are able to enrich their knowledge about a new land in order to live in harmony. To elaborate, newcomers can comply with native community and the locals can be exposed to foreign lifestyles.
In conclusion, it must be said that living in another country has become a complex issue with no easy solutions. Having considered both side of the issue, I would argue that it is vital to compliance with new custom and tradition in the host community as well as maintenance suitable own culture. If individuals just carry out one of these two terms, they might to face a dilemma or their origin could be disappear unpredictably.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 90, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...easons why I agree with the essential of adjusting to the traditional life in the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2521.0 1615.20841683 156% => OK
No of words: 507.0 315.596192385 161% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97238658777 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84200854222 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497041420118 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 796.5 506.74238477 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0285509031 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.047619048 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157334418888 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04706385024 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672706316762 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104610696801 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00670027825138 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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