Art is considered an important part off society as well as an expression office culture. Do you think it is important for children to be taught art? Do you think children should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subjects?
Art which play dynamic role in highlighting culture and to through art artist can easily portray their thoughts through painting please stop therefore it is important for children to learn art at school that does not mean that other subjects should be ignored.
Firstly, it is evident even from psychological theories that imagination and creativity enhance the productivity of student which helps them to grow and with art student better understands things and learn fast than those who do not pay much attention on art in school.
Secondly, hello art helps students to learn more about different tradition and values for instance if someone moved abroad and living there for decades then he would assimilate that culture and eventually his offspring’s as well if have the office springs have encouraged at the school to get to know about their art and culture they would come to know about their rich traditions.
Thirdly, some parents also play crucial role in eagle do not encourage their children to keep focus on art because they considered it less important and they believed that art does not provide them any decent job, but art is very unique as it has a number of jobs such as calligraphy and more.
Finally institutes and students should keep healthy balance they could learn other subjects as well such as science English mathematics and history they have to give equal time to every subject in order to have vast knowledge of each field.
More preferable, learning art helps student to measure his critical thinking and reasoning which elevates its position and put one estate I hate the rest of children. Besides, students should also have knowledge about other subjects in order to keep sound balance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 207, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
...ent better understands things and learn fast than those who do not pay much attentio...
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Line 4, column 227, Rule ID: VERY_UNIQUE[1]
Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
...provide them any decent job, but art is very unique as it has a number of jobs such as call...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
... of jobs such as calligraphy and more. Finally institutes and students should keep hea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, well, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01742160279 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50492843012 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.7787035253 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 205.714285714 106.682146367 193% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.0 20.7667163134 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.7142857143 7.06120827912 265% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306422537219 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139160123665 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738468646959 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15436508673 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712053981185 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 13.0946893788 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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