There is no doubt that due to globalization human race is able to reach far ends of this world, because of this many would like to but foreign produce goods instead of locally made one. At some extent, I agree with this statement and will discuss my view later in this essay.
To begin with, on the one hand, physical possession of goods became a way to show one's status in society, hence demand for international products has seen incredible ascending trend. For instance, a wealthy person would like to buy German or Italian made cars like Rolls-Royce or Lamborghini instead of Indian manufacturing vehicle, which has comparatively less presence in society. In addition to this, outsource products carry more quality, feature and customer service, which may not the case in in-house products. For example, iPhone has much better quality control and services as compare to Micromax, which is an India base telecom company. However, despite of these merits there are some benefits which may compel consumers to buy locally made goods.
Firstly, In-house produced goods are much cheaper than there premium competitors. Due to this, it make more excisable for general public with lower daily wages. Apart from the price factor there are many more things which we can consider in this scenario. To illustrate, by purchasing local goods we may able to support our country's economy, as home grown companies may able to create more jobs due to their manufacturing plants would be in same country as compare to overseas companies which has only service center or sales teams working in particular country.
In conclusion, whether buying goods or services depends on individual's choice, as if they want to buy cost competitive goods or more premium one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, so, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07266435986 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60603486686 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643598615917 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0847644047 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.166666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9166666667 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0951431702721 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361492301303 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352338973778 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0576355856347 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321729852112 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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