Smoking not only harms smokers, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Scientists claim that smoking not only leads to health problems for smokers but also for those who breathe the smoke of others’ cigarettes. As a consequence, smoking should not be allowed in public. I strongly advocate a ban as the most appropriate course of action.
To begin with, no benefit has been discovered in smoking yet. Many wonder what the fundamental reason for this action is. To explain more, human basic needs such as food, a place to live, proper clothing, and starting a family are completely understandable. However, there is no compulsory evidence that proves using cigarettes is a necessity of life. Based on scientific researches conducted in recent years, the main reason for this vice of modern life is nothing but an illusion. As a matter of fact, smokers falsely believe that when they smoke, it gives them a sense of relief; however, it is just in their mind and is considered only a bad habit, not more.
Furthermore, this phenomenon is not without effects on both smokers and passive smokers. Passive smokers are the ones who breathe the smoke of other people’s cigarette, which this can result in irreversible physical repercussions on both aforementioned groups. Lung problems and heart diseases among them are obvious examples. In addition, most specialists are of the opinion that smoking not only has bad effects on the body but also on the mind and the way of thinking. Based on a study carried out in the UK in 2019, which corroborates the above information, over 85% of people who had been smoking for over ten years, were suffering from various illnesses. This study revealed that the smoking rate in society, particularly among the youth, has escalated greatly.
In conclusion, although a ban might seem too harsh, it, indeed, will prevent so many physical and mental risks for both smokers and passive ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun wonder seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many wonders'.
Suggestion: Many wonders
...fit has been discovered in smoking yet. Many wonder what the fundamental reason for this ac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0064516129 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7658840294 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593548387097 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1772000018 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261749780823 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808486293181 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818546230857 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161415361238 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112744910348 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.