Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, many people usually try their best to become more rich because of many reasons as they want to have a better life. However, In my opinion, It is really necessary to help other people when they are richer. In this essay, I will give reasons for my view.
To my knowledge, the rate between the rich and the poor has a long distance when rich people is fewer than the poor, especially in developed countries. I think it is better for the rich to help other people who live in poverty to have a balance in all over the world. When rich people help the others, they can feel better and more untroubles in their mind. everyone knows that when we see person’s smile, we aslo feel happier so it is so great if we can see so much smiles in our lives. Moreover, helping other people when they are in difficulties is very necessary because it is ethics of person. I am sure that when we were students, we were always taught that we should learn how to love and help other people.
In addition, helping the others is helping ourselves because when we are kind with people, we are also given a special presents in the nearly future which we never think about. We should know that nowadays, there are more and more people who want to help the poor especially famous people or businessman because they can understand that when they try to do more and more good things they can become more famous and they also get so much lucky in their lives.
To sum up I think when we are becoming richer, we should spend more time to help other people because we not only can make them have welfare but also we can find the happiness in ourlives. Consequently, rich is opportunity to do many things for the others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, really, so, i think, in addition, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39873417722 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24131073309 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462025316456 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4252924075 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.923076923 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236413589482 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113865313998 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579920773549 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165293937846 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237861268561 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.