It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people enunciate a point that it is more important to spend taxpayers’ money on promoting the citizens to live healthier than using it on medical treatment for already ill people. This is not a bad idea, however, I find it not really practical in today’s society and hard to agree with
First of all, the gorvernment should center on financing the treatment of illness due to the increasingly fee of curing. Along with the prolifertion of human society, more and more bizzare diseases have been found, some of them are severe and cost a lot of money to get rid of. Hence, the support from government funding as well as health insurances is highly necessary, especially to patients who do not have enough money such as homeless or unemployed people. Moreover, it’s usually difficult to work when being ill, this may lead to the reduction in the workers’ salary since they cannot complete their job; so medical fee would be a really big concern.
The second reason is that the gorvernment receives taxes revenue, so their duty is to take care of the taxpayers, which mean providing them with proper social services, including medical treatments. By allocating money for patients, supporting them with the medical fee, it will not only helps them to overcome certain financial problems but also makes them feel more willing to pay taxes since they can see it is good for them. Furthermore, many attemps made by the authorities in promoting a healthy lifestyle seem to be useless as living healthy is a choice, it must comes from ourselves’ awareness. In fact, although everyone wants to have a longer life expectancy, excercising or eating nourishing food may be hard because it is not as pleasant as laying on sofa with a pizza on the table.
In short, I defnitely disagree with the idea of using public money on promoting a healthier life instead of supporting patients’ medical fee since many kinds of taxes have been payed for health services.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, so, well, in fact, in short, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91916167665 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70004276178 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592814371257 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 21.8137571271 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 164.3 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4 7.06120827912 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201712311881 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793775698665 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919281438285 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135196500239 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890718356804 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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