Does Internet need to be controlled by the government? Justify your answer.
Due to technological development every individual in the world has access to internet. People believe that the internet should be monitored or regulated by Government authorities, on the contrary some people are of opinion that it is a free source and should not be controlled. In this essay, we will discuss both the sided and give our opinion. Firstly, we will explore the benefits of internet to human world. Secondly, we will list down how the internet is being misused for unethical purposes.
We live in a fast-paced world, where internet plays a most pivotal role. Today, internet is used in every field like banking, business, education, shopping and most importantly in work places. People are enjoying the unlimited benefits of use of internet. For example, a national survey among working professionals of multinational companies resulted that 80% people were benefitted by using internet by saving their time. Additionally, internet service is used nowadays in domestic chores as well, for instance, buying groceries online, this saves a lot of time.
On the other hand, with pros always comes cons. Similarly, the increase in popularity of use of internet has also resulted in misuse of it for unlawful activities by young people. For instance, adolescents access few websites that have pornographic content which directly impacts the well-being of child and they become addicted to it. Furthermore, due to increased access to internet, the virtual security of personal information has come into question. To illustrate, in the past, many hackers had absorbed the personal data from banking system and used it for looting money from customers. Additionally, this personal information stored on internet are sold by big IT giants to small companies for handsome amount of money, which as a result, leads to spam calls to customers for irrelevant product services. To recapitulate, the use of internet should be monitored and governed to avoid these cybercrimes.
To conclude, the advancement of technology has resulted in unlimited access to internet which in turn has many advantages, but in my opinion, the number of cybercriminals has also considerably increased. Therefore, regulations on internet are the need of an hour.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33802816901 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00532358445 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6806852357 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7368421053 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6842105263 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42105263158 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180234676291 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641402259096 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525543224428 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116246233593 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289107514342 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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