It is irrefutable to say that an education is basic necessity for every individual in advanced era. Without education it is not possible to live happier and wealthy life. It is believed by some that it is best way to get job to showing university degree, while other think that it is great wat to go directly for work and get experience. I, however, agree with formar statement university degree is required for getting extraordinary jobs.
To begin with, getting an admission in university is boon for students as it has numerous benefits in their life. One can get marvellous job in different sectors such as IT, Engineering and Pharmaceutical field and feed their family in better manar. Moreover, students can learn new paramount skill at university and can apply in their life. Additionally, students at university can get knowledge with modern technical instrument and with proper understanding about any particular subject.
On the other hand, in current time deggre certificate is quite essential for getting a good jobs. Without knowledge of any particular subject or area it would give them adverse effect. Besides, go for job without academic knowledge will take longer period of time to learn something new. In exemplification one can get job without education in multinational organisation however he can not get very fast famailier with his job.
To recapitulate, i reiterate to say that university degree is very crucial for individuals as it provide plenty amount of opportunity to grow-up in any sector rathar than go for job without education.
- Some people think that organizations would benefit more from young managers than from older ones To what extent do you agree or disagree 81
- Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead Discuss both sides and give your opinion 71
- The difference in age between parents and their children has increased compared to the past Do you think advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages 56
- Some people say that government should break down all the historical buildings and replace them with modern buildings Do you agree or disagree 61
- Pollution of rivers lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment What are the possible causes of water pollution and what effects does this have on animal life and human society 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: is the best
...hy life. It is believed by some that it is best way to get job to showing university de...
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Suggestion: period
...out academic knowledge will take longer period of time to learn something new. In exemplificat...
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Suggestion:
...isation however he can not get very fast famailier with his job. To recapitula...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ilier with his job. To recapitulate, i reiterate to say that university degree...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, so, while, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16078431373 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01219870239 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580392156863 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1458499574 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.230769231 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240391130094 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894677245024 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885610803141 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147672224686 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658359322466 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.