Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, a plentiful number of overwhelming options modern life has provided to us with the help of the internet and globalization. And, I firmly concur with the given notion. In this essay, I will explain the reasons why people have many choices these days.
Apparently, the world wide web has led to the dramatic availability of data and different services. Before the internet information was a precious resource and people made efforts to gain it through books and education whereas currently, we are rather forced to filter its stream so as not to get burdened by it. For instance, earlier people used television with a limited choice of channels for entertainment while today we are able to watch whatever we like on-demand and often for free.
Alongside the influence of the internet, technical advances, and globalization have eliminated barriers in international trade and transportation. The wide choice of foreign food products and other goods has made people extremely consumerist and seeking the meaning of their lives in new purchases. The availability of options can also delightful for people but may even lead to the purchase of the wrong product or service.
In conclusion, we are faced with a huge number of choices in most areas of our life and they sometimes mislead us and make our choice too difficult. In order to elude with these kinds of demerits we should learn to recognize our real needs and values and make a right option from the diverse options available.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, if, may, so, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04032258065 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85113437453 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633064516129 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2111761795 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.636363636 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209735371182 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710967443812 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573278042556 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119557944557 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346085320026 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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