Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
Some people would argue that in the today's world people have too many choices to make in life. To a great extent, I am diametrically opposed with this statement and this essay will show my personal view.
On the one hand, some people do not even have a chance in their life to choose. Since some have strict, narrow-minded and conservative parents, they do not even have the right to speak themself let alone making a choice. Take my cousin as an typical example, she has had a dream of becoming a singer, a songwriter, an artist since she was a little and the genuinely wanted to follow her dream after graduating from high school. Despite knowing her talent and dream, her parents made her to enter university and become a doctor simply because they wanted her to follow their footsteps as well as family's tradition.
On the other hand, since the world is becoming more and more modern and advanced, people has a milliard of things to try and chose. However, it is the people' rights to decide how they are going to live their lives. Moreover, making too much choices does not mean you breaking the or committing a crime. One thing is considered as "socially unacceptable" only when it affects other people or violates the law.
In a nutshell, having too much choices is not a bad thing, sometimes, we have to appreciate it. As long as it does not affect others or violate the law, it is people' free rights to have choices in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...lone making a choice. Take my cousin as an typical example, she has had a dream of...
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Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...ced, people has a milliard of things to try and chose. However, it is the people rights...
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Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... live their lives. Moreover, making too much choices does not mean you breaking the ...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... the law. In a nutshell, having too much choices is not a bad thing, sometimes, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, well, as well as, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 5.60731707317 464% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 259.0 196.424390244 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6138996139 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59329577714 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 106.607317073 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7405902554 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5833333333 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276374152663 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105877886043 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844178969441 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185473532057 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101967604664 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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