You rent an apartment. You want to tell your landlord that you are happy with the apartment in general, but there are some small repairs that need to be carried out. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
• say what you like about the apartment
• describe the repairs that need to be made
• explain how the repairs will improve your quality of life
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am glad to inform you, that I am content with your house that I have recently located to. However, there are some repair work that is required to be done on topmost.
In regards to the apartment, it’s beautiful as it has conservatory, the favorite part of the house. Also, the backyard is well equipped with vegetables and fruits. Moreover, the garden has ample space to decorate with different flowers. Besides, the balcony gives the cozy look as I can have my coffee and read book in peaceful environment.
Let me brief you about the reconstruction required in the living area. The wall meant for placing television has some cracks that can lead to water seepage, so it is should be taken care on priority. Moreover, the knob of the kitchen door is not in place and can break anytime.
All the improvement that’s necessary will make the house look clean and clear. Once the knob gets in place it will avoid using hands directly on door that in turn will keep the door dry and tidy.
I really look forward to your cooperation in this.
Yours sincerely
Urvashi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: Regarding; With regard to
... is required to be done on topmost. In regards to the apartment, it’s beautiful as it has...
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Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: IS_SHOULD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...s that can lead to water seepage, so it is should be taken care on priority. Moreo...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73056994819 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47771348948 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642487046632 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6354116367 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2307692308 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146443103409 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487490888567 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523151579402 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737357036908 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062692148236 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.