You want to arrange a conference for your company, and you need to ask one of your colleagues to give a presentation in this conference.
Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter include:
Details about the conference
Why you want your colleague to give the presentation
What arrangement you will do for this conference
Dear Ibrahim,
I am writing to ask you a favor regarding preparing a presentation for a conference.
You may aware that our office is holding a conference regarding new safety methods and rules while driving. Many renowned personalities would attend this including the manager of the UAQ traffic department. The conference is scheduled for 8th July 2021 i.e on Thursday. The timings will be from 10:00 am until 04:00 pm. There may be a half an hour break in between at 2 or 2:30 pm. We are planning to organize all the arrangements in the male lecture room as it is quite spacious.
While discussing with the manager, we both agreed that you are a perfect candidate for this presentation. You are the only employee with an IT background in this office. You may well aware of how to prepare a presentation. Moreover, you have also attended a recent lecture held in Sharjah (UAE) on road safety to know current rules and regulations. This will also help to boost up your confidence and polish your abilities.
To aid you to complete this presentation, I will give you 5 days of timing. I will provide you with a laptop and internet connection. Moreover, I will distribute your office job among other employees to reduce your burden. I would arrange a speaker and a projector on the day of the conference you. During the break, we will serve snacks and cold drinks to all.
If you have any doubt or queries, please feel free to ask me anytime.
Thanks
With regards
Ramandeep Kaur (senior assistance)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 137, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...ntation. You are the only employee with an IT background in this office. You may well...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72243346008 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78610983544 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 127.690721649 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61216730038 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.2808680805 44.8134815571 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.3684210526 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8421052632 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94736842105 4.34317383033 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.94845360825 253% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295374675496 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837040895481 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671964374057 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132568549751 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859824303691 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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