According to statistical data these days many students tend to work or spend their time visiting other places before deciding to go to university. In my view, this trend will be the best solution for the ever graduating people. In this following essay I will try to explain why I think that way.
Overall, there are at least two benefits from it. First and foremost, this way will help to decline a common stereotype in society that every child must continue their education after school. For example, in my country the last grade learners should pass the National Unity Test in order to study in university and if one of students decides don’t pass this exam his parents, friends and teachers start to give advice that next his future depends only on how much score he will achieve and which university he will go to. However,if the number of students who prefer to take a gap before going to university increases, more people also will think in other ways.
Secondly, by doing something else, besides studying in university like traveling or working, young people get their own experience, consequently it gives many benefits regarding choice of profession. The gap between school and university helps to be aware of what they actually need, based on their own opinion and experiences.For example, results of a survey getting from university students show that 70% learners do not continue this chosen department or profession, moreover many students were choose certain department due to the fact that they didn’t know want to study.
To sum up, it is clear that taking a break in studying helps to crush the standard stereotypes in society and lack of own experiences of the younger generation causes inappropriate professions, in order to tackle it, it would be better to take a gap and comprehend what students want to do.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many
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...nd comprehend what students want to do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, at least, for example, i think, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92903225806 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66947909271 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622580645161 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.955954404 49.4020404114 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.8 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.5 7.06120827912 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269294902812 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928931891106 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056829507267 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150158155758 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177127638788 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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