Some people believe that there should be a law which prevents young people under the age of 18 being outside after midnight.Do you agree or disagree.
Irrefutably, nowdays a dramatic increses is manifested in the crime rate since, some yesteryear. Today, many youngsters spend most of their time from out of the house after midnight. However several people claim that the law should be imposed on them so that they restricted to be at home rather than outside. I agree with this view and this essay would shed light on the valid standpoints in the consequent paragraphs.
To commence with the favour of point, the first reason is that spending time far from the house during bewitching hours is more dangerous for everyone, particularly for kids who are under 18. Because , in the dead of night, there are more chances of murder and kidnapping. Owing to that, it's like a risk to going outside the apartment after hush of night. If juvenile takes this risk, then it will endangerment for them. To example a research of Oxford university states that if youth pay out a lot of time from outside during midnight, then it will have a more chances of incidents. However, it is not only risky for adolescents but also for adults. If government enforce some regulations to restrict them from going outside, then it will be beneficial. Because only the ministry control these types of risks. So, authors have a great role in thes situations.
However, midnight parties, functions are also encourage these worst situations. Sometimes, during late night childrens spend time in the college libraries, restaurants and in the parties and they drink alcohol and take drugs. Owing to that they become drug addicted. If government take initiatives to restrict such kind of activities, then we can protect our generation from these bad habits.
In compendium, I strongly agree with the given view because of above reasons. It is only the hands of the administration to control the outside activities of the youngsters during midnight. If government can't do this, then there is no another solution to solve this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9755351682 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71956517229 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584097859327 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6025265109 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.35 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.35 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154350721656 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381466226778 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506821085823 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925137052459 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668190736897 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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