In this cutting- edge era, each and every people love to eat fast food, but more preference give by the children to eat junk food. Although, it is injurious for health but, nowadays, mostly kids love to eat fast food rather than healthy food.
Majority of people reckon that, parents should be installed the healthy eating habits in their children. On the other hand, another masses believed that education institutes must be taught to students about healthy food and healthy lifestyle in schools. I shall put down the both views as well as give the my opinion with the appropriate examples and causes in further composition.
To commence with, healthy food play the crucial role in order to diseases free life. Today, children eat unhealthy food and they faced the lot of healthy related issues in future. Nowadays, have a dire need to give the knowledge about nutritious food, so that, children learned the importance of healthy food. First and foremost, parents should give the information about the nutrition diet alongside they must give the awareness to children about harmful impact of unhealthy food. As a parents, they liable to feed they healthy food their children.some Parents, however, have a awareness about their responsibility and they feed the good food to their child but, few of parents are do not look after about what their child eat alongside they do not give the any knowledge about healthy diet. Which leads to, child face serious illness. According to my perception, parents should be aware about the eating habit of child and give the proper guidelines about diet.
Moreover, majority of people think that, teachers should be taught to students about healthy food. Firstly, students listen with more attention what their teacher tech them rather then what their parents told them. So, tutor must give the lesson to child about importance of food. Secondly, schools must proved the some mandatory subject related to food and health. To instance, nowadays, government made the law about the subjects which give the right guideline about health. According to my perception, teacher give the proper information about healthy life and feeding habits this is extremely beneficial for each and every child.
To conclude, parents and teachers both have a responsibility about give the awareness about healthy lifestyle. Nevertheless, some parents give the information about food to their child but, teachers given the proper guideline about good feeding habits and healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2098.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 405.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18024691358 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48511618826 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449382716049 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 625.5 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2616184508 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.9 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.49307825631 0.244688304435 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174673176272 0.084324248473 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810626532196 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317986283877 0.151304729494 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828347161812 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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