What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?
The more modern the life is, the more polluted the environment becomes. One of the dangerous pollution that affects to almost biological system is water pollution.
In general, water takes an important role in the earth, it needs for almost activities of people, animals and plants. For example, people used water for wash, clothing or planting, on the other hand, plants need water to develop and animals such as rabbits need grass to eat. Hence, if the amount of water becomes shortage, the life circle will be destroyed. In addition, polluted water can be harmful to health of people and animals that lives around there. In the negative aspect, in one day nearby now, the water will be shortage and all of things will die without water.
Practically, water sources has been polluted because of lots of causes including the littering, living activities of people, exhausted chemistry from chemical factory, etc. After all, the power of benefit affect completely to people thinking, it conveys them do a lot of things harming for the environment. In order to convenient with their lives, people remove rubbish to the rivers, or lakes around them. Businesses rush for the money and do not pay attention about nature and do not consider about what consequences they have to stand. These factors lead the water becoming seriously polluted and become a alarming problem that we have to cope with.
In conclusion, the nature mother serves us well and in order to thanks for her, we need to love the nature in return. We love through staying with green everyday, studying to identify the method to save the environment in general and water resources in particular.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 608, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... becoming seriously polluted and become a alarming problem that we have to cope w...
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Line 7, column 154, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...urn. We love through staying with green everyday, studying to identify the method to sav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, well, after all, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in general, in particular, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98924731183 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51872141264 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594982078853 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5178049967 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.4285714286 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200510516381 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066158272584 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039888224334 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107336192859 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504706421249 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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