Many people go to university for academic study. More people should
be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified
workers such as electricians and plumbers. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?
it is true that numerous people opt for following tertiary education instead of vocational training.While nobody can deny university graduates, I firmly agree that students should be encouraged to take part in training courses to become skilled workers.
there are two prime reasons why workers should be trained professionally.Firstly, the more society develops, the higher need for the construction of a large number of facilities is.The need for manual workers specializing in terms of electricity,water,or public buildings..is increasingly omnipresent.Therefore, in order to meet the community’s need of collar-workers, there must be more people who are supported to land manual jobs. For example, the warranty of some public facilities like: schools and hospitals,.. must be carried out by specialized workers.Secondly,if there are so many students leaning towards pursuing higher education, the unemployment rate will rocket because the labour market will not generate enough occupations for all of them.
Furthermore, it is necessary that vocational training should be taken seriously in both families and schools. In terms of schools,vocational knowledge needed to be included in some curriculum activities or hands-on experiences with a view to providing students with the opportunity to gain insight into that fields not to mention that they may act as career orientation for pupils having intention to pursue that kind of works.Last but not least,it is time for parents to back their children up and give their offsprings assistance to attend programmes teaching them to be professional workers as a long-term goal to fulfil their ambition if children are drawn attention their attention to that specialization.
In conclusion, I agree that we should encourage more students to be trained as professional workers since without them,society can not function effectively.
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 11
- More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes cars and other items What are the reasons Do you think it is a positive or negative development 84
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- Some tourists may damage touristic sites Explain some of the negative effects may be Suggest some solutions to this problem 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75444839858 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.67934702205 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619217081851 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 173.887366782 49.4020404114 352% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 231.0 106.682146367 217% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.1428571429 20.7667163134 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.5714285714 7.06120827912 263% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234462435256 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113460995265 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060117015309 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152833399175 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419297880725 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.7 13.0946893788 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.96 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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