Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Nowadays, employment in urban areas are (is) increasing day by day due to technological advancements in
every field.Many people are attracting (attracted) towards the self-employment sector and avoiding to be bounded
by any organisation.This eassy intends to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of such practise in
ensuring paragraphs.
Firstly,advantages of public's tendancy towards to be self-employed is may be to achieve the set goals
and create their own success story.In this case, person is not bounded by and limitations, rules and
regulations. They can earn lots of money and fame if they succeed while the organisation's salary and
growth are limited and one have to obey the guidelines .For instance, all the company (companies) have set
predefined working hours and other strict rules.It is difficult to coupe (cope) up with for someone so this can be a major
factor which directs the public towards self employment.
On other hand,there are a few drawbacks of being self-employed, one hase to start working from scratch
and they need to arrange all the necessary things by their own.Sometimes, it demands huge finance which
is difficult to manage for someone.For example,a group of educated person is working on a start-up. First
they have to arrange the sponsers, they have to invest lots of time in it and still there is no surity
reagarding to get invested money back.Sometime they have to face the different consequence of
failures. This can be in the form of stress and financial losses.
In conclusion, there are many cons in working with organisation such as limited growth and income
which might provoke them to be self-employed and they need to be ready to face many difficulties.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27436823105 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21314241343 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574007220217 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.5370918455 49.4020404114 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 208.714285714 106.682146367 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.5714285714 20.7667163134 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1428571429 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36405205956 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183784948835 0.084324248473 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965732147258 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102727763978 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115634032162 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.2 13.0946893788 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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