Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring? What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?
Many hold a belief that the existence of zoos is redundant in contemporary society. There are many forces that foster the consistency of the problem, that can be analyzed and replaced separately. This essay will present an overview of causes and solutions to zoos.
Firstly, it is note-worthy that keeping wild animals in cages is really a brutal one for the animals. Nowadays, many studies have shown that although it is invisible, zoo authorities do not provide necessary foods and comfortable life which are required for the survival and production of the animals. Secondly, it will be a grave mistake to neglect the fact that wildlife parks blame endangered animals as tools for earning money, which negatively affects their lifestyles. For example, citizens prefer seeing and touching endangered species directly rather than watching them on TV programs.
In tackling this problem, some feasible and effective measures should be adopted by local governments. To be specific, the authorities should enact a complete ban on the capture of animals with bad purposes and promote animal rights for the safety of them. Another approach is to focus on the fact that government should enhance the overall awareness of residents towards animals’ survival by publicity and education and make them realize the fact that animals play an instrument in people’s life, which should be substituted by natural parks. For instance, Safari Park, where can give them much freedom and extensive spaces, can be a better alternative than a zoo.
According to the above analysis, we can conclude that illegal animal capture and using wild animals as tools are the main reasons. In dealing with this matter, governments and the awareness of inhabitants should play the active role.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hold seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many holds'.
Suggestion: Many holds
Many hold a belief that the existence of zoos is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26855123675 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72669739748 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597173144876 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4494851943 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.692307692 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16172726745 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577611501404 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519702250898 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941684566806 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522400836627 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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