To commence with, in this cutting-edge era countless people go for study far away from their home town and stay with their friends in sharing room. Moreover, students who live in urban areas independently, become extravagant because of no influence of parents or other family members. Meanwhile, they get an addiction to intoxication products namely alcohol and drugs, as their other friends taking these for enjoyment purposes. People who complete their academy won't come back to live with family because of employment and not obtain moral value and respect.
Additionally, people become independent and do not accept their parents to stay with them. Youngsters who live alone feel more isolated and this becomes a serious problem for them. Furthermore, living lonely causes depression and anxiety which have detrimental effects on individuals' health. Sometimes due to mental disease people commit suicide as no one in their life to express their feelings.
However, living alone teach them the value of parents as all household chore they have to do alone without any help. They value more to their parents as they have to feed themselves.
To close the discussion, living alone while studying or job has countless drawbacks for individuals, nonetheless, they also learn respect towards their family.
- Now big cities have many problems What are these problems Do you think the government should encourage city residents to move to small cities and towns 61
- Today more and more full time university students focus on other activities rather than spend a lot of time studying Some people think it is essential for university students to be involved in other activities To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change their jobs To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Nowadays more people are choosing to live with their friends or alone rather than with their families this trend is likely to have a negative impact on community To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...xiety which have detrimental effects on individuals health. Sometimes due to mental disease...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 13.1623246493 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36893203883 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69313808447 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635922330097 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.478316019 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.545454545 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320918501033 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124352035825 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576905937361 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184607729244 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667171175308 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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