New parents should attend parenting courses to bring up their children well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays it is becoming necessary for parents to take part in training sessions in order to enhance parenting skills. However, I partly agree with this statement.
On the one hand, we cannot deny the fact that classes that aimed at teaching young couples about proper parenting highly important. Firstly, those who work in such classes are experts in their field, therefore, they can help to establish an integral interlinkage in the field of education between family and society, parents and children in order to ensure the proper upbringing of the next generation, also they will provide parents with appropriate data about children`s behavior in certain age, which is crucial when it comes to getting along with children. Moreover, people attending such sessions can make new friends and exchange information about proper upbringing from their experiences, this can provide them with clear picture of the parenting process.
On the other hand, we can dispense with specific courses when it comes to the complete upbringing of the child. Main alternative can be reading books related to that topic. Hence books will provide more in-depth information, because they are written by professionals. Even young parents on the youtube promote books because they are more affordable. Besides, grandparents should be involved in raising the child, since they have rich parenting experience, can provide support and encouragement when parents and grandparents collaborate in raising children. Due to this cooperation mothers are feeling more confident, they can approach parenting with more positivity and persistence, which can boost their children’s social development. As an example, in recently provided research it was proven that the presence of grandparents in the upbringing of a child has a positive effect on children.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that parenting classes are essential. At the same time, however there a huge number of alternatives like involving grandparents in raisin grandchildren and reading books where tips on how to properly guide and nurture a child is available.
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46319018405 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94545142005 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573619631902 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.8498544962 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.214285714 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206047971602 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717260672941 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051894317113 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121438606715 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451250382549 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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